Tuesday 22 August 2023

Saying So Much With So Little


Is a meme poetry? What about a quote? How short must a poem be to be considered poetry?


I’ve noticed that many longer works tend not to get as much attention as shorter poems as a moderator of Invisible Poets  and  Wheelsong Poetry on Facebook. 


Writing memes seems to be prevalent as a sort of attention deficit alternative to constructive wisdom. Although short, many do constitute snippets of practical knowledge, which bounce into the realms of poetry. The same thing with quotes


Considered the shortest poem ever written, I’d like for you to consider both the content and the clever application of this timeless poem from 1927…


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Fleas

by  Strickland Gillian


Adam Had’em 

 

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With such ripe content applied in such a brilliant and originally whimsical manner, Gillian sought to address a most poignant question… how long have fleas been around?! Also known as  Lines On The Antiquity Of Microbes“, I am guessing Strickland was trying to make up for the brevity of his work with a big fancy title!


Talk about short and spontaneous! Mary Frye wrote this on a brown paper grocery bag in a flurry of merciful pity for a grieving friend…


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Do Not Stand At My Grave And Weep

by Mary Elizabeth Frye


Do not stand at my grave and weep:
I am not there; I do not sleep.
I am a thousand winds that blow,
I am the diamond glints on snow,
I am the sun on ripened grain,
I am the gentle autumn rain.
When you awaken in the morning’s hush
I am the swift uplifting rush
Of quiet birds in circling flight.
I am the soft starshine at night.
Do not stand at my grave and cry:
I am not there; I did not die.


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Although not a short short poem, this sweet work in twelve lines wonderfully sums up where the spirit may be when one stands at the foot of the grace and wept for a lost loved one.


I’ve had my nose in a dogeared old paperback of the collective works of Robert Frost, of which this one caught my attention…


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Fire And Ice

By Robert Frost


Some say the world will end in fire,

Some say in ice.

From what I’ve tasted of desire

I hold with those who favor fire.

But if it had to perish twice,

I think I know enough of hate

To say that for destruction ice

Is also great

And would suffice.


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The struggle of contrasts between the metaphors in this seemingly simple yet ambiguous poem creates a tension that begs a reader to read it again for different meanings.


Reading multiple times to discern hidden messages is the ultimate comment one could give a poet, much as a burp in some cultures would be a compliment to the chef! 


Wringing truth out of short fabrics of tiny poems to wet the whistle of a reader is not as easy as it seems! Only the most multidimensional messages seem to stick, so it is best to find as many hidden meanings as possible to sandwich in there, as the above examples illustrate.


Do you have any suggestions for this article? I’d love to hear them! Please feel free to comment below, and as always, thank you for reading.


Matt Elmore

7 comments:

  1. Very good and informative.

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    1. My deepest gratitude… I hope it was entertaining if not informative!

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  2. Great piece Matt. I've been using the Gillian poem for years, but never knew the title until I was today years old.

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    1. Fear not sir… I’ve heard it is a “little” known title…

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  3. Hello Steve and thanks so much for a tremendously helpful post. Personally, I find it a little easier to write shorter poems. Even 4 to 6 lines. Hope you won't mind me sharing this, but when it comes to "Memes," I use a (yearly subscribed) quote creator entitled: "Quozio" for some of my shorter poems and quotes. They also have a robust "Free" version. I will create a poem and post it on the Wheelsong Poetry page so you can see what it looks like. Thanks again for all you do to make a profound and positive impact on the lives of many, who are near, far, seen, unseen, and in "younder-places!"

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  4. And for some odd reason I’m surprised! We write our works and mean to say so many things and yet for some foolish reason there are obviously hidden or in depth sub structures in other peoples works, Well, Duh! Note to self, thinking isn’t dangerous, no matter what i think🤔 Lol I enjoyed this Matt. Thank you.

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  5. All about love.
    (by a recently jilted lover).


    l'amour

    l'amour

    l'amour




    L’amour no more!

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