Wednesday, 15 May 2024

Experimental Poetry 2: Stream of Consciousness


This is the second post in my series on experimental poetry. There are many poets who, down through the ages, have tried to push the boundaries of poetry beyond what is expected, and in some cases, what some might consider acceptable. But poetry, as I will keep saying, has no rules. Look at the work of poets such as Ezra Pound, e e cummings and Edwin Morgan, and you will see this is true. 

One of the ways to break out of a poetic rut is to forget all the rules and techniques you already adhere to when you write (Yeah, I know. It's not easy), and just write freely and without any constraints. 

Method 5: Stream of Consciousness is a technique where you simply write (or speak into a recorder) at random, using whatever comes into your mind. Better still, try writing without even thinking - unconsciously.  Perhaps the results will be unusable or gibberish. It doesn't really matter. You are creating something. Just keep writing and do it very fast. Let your mind run away with you. Sooner or later there will be something that emerges that you could never have created by simply sticking to your tried and tested methods. 

This method might result in some really strange and original poetry, but even if it doesn't, the very act of writing freely without thinking too much will loosen you up as a poet, and allow you to exercise and develop your writing agility. Who knows, it might even make you stand out from the poetic crowd!

Steve Wheeler

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Experimental Poetry 1: Found Poetry

7 comments:

  1. Thank you I needed this encouragement today

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  2. I tried this and it worked wonders for me. I merely wrote exactly what I thought without any fiddling about. Thanks for the tip Steve! It’s flowtastic!!!!

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  3. Believe it or not I begin a lot of poems this way where I almost brain vomit onto a page for a few minutes and pick the fragments apart then a couplet will spring and so on and out of that word spew will spring 3-4 poems from that one moment many times. Excellent stuff

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  4. Here's my attempt:

    Dahlias spurting signs
    Over the meadows
    flying, flying crying
    Rivers flowing growing
    Mingling with other flora
    The daisies, tulips, forsythia
    Ah! these beauteous flowers
    Dinosaurs in the wilderness
    Of experience of simultanaety
    Where all is merged
    All combined
    To the One
    Universal whole
    That may be God.
    Totality.
    In between trees, stars, galaxies
    Evading the slack nodes of black holes
    The scatter of dark matter
    The dark energy
    That blows the universe apart
    To reveal who knows what behind
    Ah, here in random unknowing writhing
    Where human comprehension
    Falters, divides, falls back
    Descrying what we know as real
    Entering into an unknown deal
    Seal the real with the mystic feel
    Of the sea of infinite
    Whatever.

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  5. I do something similar--"writing" random thoughts in my head as I make the 2+hour journey between LA & SB counties. I have discovered some poems this way. The trouble then is to memorize then, once found, so I can record them once arrived.😁

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  6. Such an amazing way to write. It's difficult to let go and just pay attention to whatever pops in your mind. An inner voice wants to take over to impose order. You learn a lot about consciousness when you tryto stop self-directed pragmatic thinking.

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